高考英语写作满分课

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Dear Ms Jenkins,


I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.   


In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括: 

1.主题:环境保护; 

2.展览时间; 

注意: 

1.词数100左右; 

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。    

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to.

假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。


注意:


1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.  


Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

【作文题目】 假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下: 


1.栏目介绍。 


2.稿件内容; 


3.稿件长度:约400词汇  


4.交稿日期:6月28日前  

注意: 


1.词数100左右; 


2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的; 


3.开头语已为你写好。




Dear Peter,


I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.


The “Foreign Cultures’’ section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United  States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?


I’m looking forward to hearing from you.


Yours,


Li Hua


译文:


彼得,你好!


我想让你为我们学校的英文报纸写篇文章。


我校报纸的“外国文化”专栏非常受学生的欢迎。专栏里刊登的是外国朋友写的有关他们国家文化的一些文章。你愿意写一些有关你在美国居住地区文化的东西吗?我们非常欢迎有关美国人怎样庆祝节假日和美国高中学生生活的文章。你可以写任何与之相关的有趣的和富有知识性的内容,400词就可以了。你能在6月28日之前交稿吗?


我期待着收到你的来信。

此致

李华

【作文题目】 假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:    

1.出发及返回时间;

2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。   

注意: 

1.词数100左右; 

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 

3..结语已为你写好。

Dear Lucy,

I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.


Looking forward to your reply.


Yours,


Li Hua

露西,你好!

我想邀请你下周六与我们一起去附近的敬老院过重阳节。在我们的文化中,重阳节是老人的节日。我们将去敬老院和老人们一起包饺子、做蛋糕。我们也将和他们一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏,度过一段快乐的时光。我们希望这些活动会让他们快乐。我们应该在下午四点左右返回。如果你能和我们一起去的话,请告诉我们,我们会在早上九点在校门口等你。

期待你的回复。

此致

【作文题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。

1.家庭;

2.工作;

3.业余生活。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’ll do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I’ll continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I’ll travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【作文题目】假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:


李明:高个子,戴眼镜


航班号:CA985


到达:8月6日上午11:30

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to theU.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【作文题目】假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:

1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

2. 象征意义

3. 价格

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. InChina, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. 

People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!

Li Hua

【作文题目】假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:

1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)

2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)

3. 希望获准。

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。

满分作文一

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'lI be able to tell students from other countries aboutChinaand learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Hua满分作文二

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I’ve learned on the Internet that your summer camp, which is going to be held inSingapore, is round the corner. I am really interested in it.

I, who am active and enjoy various activities, hope to take part in it very much. I know the ability of communication is of great importance and I can speak English quite fluently. In addition, in your camp, there are so many students from different countries. Therefore, I can communicate with the students from different parts of the world. Not only can I introduceChinato them, but I can know more about their countries as well.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Regards,

Li Hua

满分作文三

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp inSingapore, which I am fond of for a long time. I have been looking forward to being able to not only tell the students from different countries something aboutChina, but learn about some other foreign countries as well.

Besides, I am good at English in school, especially spoken English. Last year, I won the first prize in an English speech contest. I also hope to make some contributions to the friendship between countries.

So I am eager to be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Rgards,

Li Hua


6.seat 替换sit

On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.

7.suppose 替换should

He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.

8.appreciate 替换thank


Thank you very much for you help. →

We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.

9.the case替换 true

I don’t think it is the case ( true ).

10.on替换as soon as

As soon as he arrived, he began his research. → On his arrival, he began his research..

11.due to替换because of

He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.

12.cover替换walk/read


After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.

13.contribute to替换 be helpful/useful

Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. →

Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.

14.round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby

① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?

② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).

15.come to light替换discover


The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. →


The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.

16.have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself


After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ).

17.come up with替换think of


Jack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.

18.set aside替换save

Some students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.

19.be of + n. 替换adj.


The products are of high quality (very good ) and are sold everywhere in China.

20.refer to 替换talk about/of, mention


The professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.